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-[http://www.roblox.com Roblox] is a '''free''' user-generated gaming site that makes players the architects of their own 3D worlds. Players spend over 20 million hours playing games and building in their own personal virtual worlds. Roblox is ranked #1 in the US for total engagement time within the 8-14 year old segment, and is rapidly growing in popularity amongst players aged 15+. You are given a [[:Category:ROBLOX Lua Objects|variety of objects]], [[Lua Help|a scripting language]] and a website to host your games for other people to play. With your free account, you get a [[My Character|character]] and a [[place]]. You can customize your place and character however you want, and visit anyone else's [[place]] as well.
+[http://www.roblox.com Roblox] is a free-to-play physics and scripting sandbox and social hangout for children. The game is dynamically expanding from user-generated virtual worlds and clothing for character customization. Games are created with a versatile world editor referred to as [[Studio]] with a [[:Category:ROBLOX Lua Objects|variety of objects]] and an ability to code in [[Lua Help|Lua]]. Players get a customizable [[My Character|character]] and a [[place]], and can also visit places created by other users.
-This help center is here to help you learn how to play Roblox, how to build using the [[Roblox Studio]], and how to [[Lua Help|script]] using the Lua language.
+This wiki is here to help you learn how to play Roblox, how to build using [[Roblox Studio]], and how to [[Lua Help|script]] using the Lua language.
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-The Roblox wiki encompasses [[Special:Statistics|{{NUMBEROFARTICLES}} articles and {{NUMBEROFFILES}} files]], all created by Roblox's friendly wiki [[Special:ListUsers/writer|writers]] and [[Special:ListUsers/editor|editors]]. It has been edited {{NUMBEROFEDITS}} times.
+The Roblox wiki encompasses [[Special:Statistics|{{NUMBEROFARTICLES}} articles and {{NUMBEROFFILES}} files]], all created by Roblox's friendly wiki [[Special:ListUsers/writer|writers]] and [[Special:ListUsers/editor|editors]] with {{NUMBEROFEDITS}} contributions.
-Want to be a part of our great wiki team?  Join [http://www.roblox.com/My/Groups.aspx?gid=127081 the wiki group] on Roblox to give suggestions to the people who write the wiki. Who knows, if you are dedicated enough, you might actually get your own wiki account!
+Join [http://www.roblox.com/My/Groups.aspx?gid=127081 the wiki group] on Roblox to give any suggestions, feedback, or criticism to the wiki staff.
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